In many countries, women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people think that this is because they are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security marriage can bring. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sample 1:

The fact that a significant number of women are living without a spouse has ratcheted up public interest in what has been driving this change. Although some believe that being allowed to work outside the home to earn money is the driving factor behind it, the impact of being financially independent pales in comparison with that of the shift in social values that liberate women.

Firstly, the freedom of choice, especially when it comes to marital choices, that women now enjoy has contributed much more to the change mentioned in the question than the financial factor. Traditionally, as soon as a girl reached matrimony age, her parents would arrange her marriage to shift the “burden” to other families or do so as a transaction in its most naked sense. This could be seen in the way single women aged twenty and over would be resented by their own parents and how they would be forced to marry “the highest bidder” without any regard to their feelings or wishes. Although the latter could provide them with financial security, given the choice, not many of them would have agreed to such a pre-arranged marriage, as we see in present-day society.

To add further credence to my assertion, I note the shift away from the traditional role of women, as housewives. As they are now empowered to carry out the role of a breadwinner, many opt to stay single to pursue their career goals, rather than being confined to taking care of children and doing chores. Granted, this change in gender role underpins their financial independence, but primarily the time and effort dedicated to education and work often take women’s mind of the idea of getting married as they often feel that they do not have enough time to start and care for a family. This means that the financial factor is only a by-product of a wider social movement towards gender equality.

In conclusion, being able to ensure their financial security is a manifestation of a wider change in our society that allows women to choose when and even whether to get married at all.

Sample 2:

In contemporary society, the role of women has evolved significantly, and many women no longer feel the pressure to get married. While it is true that financial independence plays a crucial role in this shift, there are also other factors at play.

To begin with, the increasing number of women in the workforce has undoubtedly contributed to their financial independence. With more women pursuing higher education and entering the professional world, they are able to earn their own income and support themselves without relying on a spouse for financial stability. This has empowered women to make choices based on personal fulfillment rather than financial security, leading many to forego marriage altogether.

However, it is important to recognize that the decision not to marry is not solely based on financial independence. Changing societal norms and attitudes towards marriage have also played a significant role. In today’s society, there is less pressure on women to conform to traditional gender roles, including getting married and starting a family. Women are now encouraged to prioritize their own ambitions and goals, whether they involve a career, travel, or personal development, rather than conforming to societal expectations of marriage.

Furthermore, the rise of individualism and the emphasis on personal freedom have also influenced women’s attitudes towards marriage. Many women now prioritize their personal autonomy and freedom over the constraints that marriage can sometimes bring. They are choosing to remain single or cohabit with a partner without formalizing the relationship through marriage, as it allows them the flexibility to live life on their own terms.

In conclusion, while financial independence has undoubtedly played a role in the changing attitudes towards marriage among women, it is not the sole factor. Changing societal norms, attitudes towards gender roles, and the rise of individualism have also contributed to this shift. As a result, women are now more empowered to make choices that align with their personal aspirations and goals, regardless of financial considerations.