Modern medicine helps to live longer. Do you agree or disagree?

Sample 1:

These days, modern medicine depending on new technology is playing an important role in people’s lives because it is said that it could quickly absorb into the human body. Therefore, personally, I agree that modern medicine can help human beings increase life expectancy. 

To begin with, it is believed that modern medicine could prevent incurable diseases and serious illnesses. For example, a number of diseases such as cholera and typhoid fever are being prevented by vaccines. As a result, people including intelligent ones can live comfortably in order to make a great contribution to their society thanks to modern medicine. 

Secondly, modern medicine has improved the health of the ageing population, so senior citizens can live a longer and more productive life than ever before. Nowadays, there is an increasing number of old people who are 100 years old or more in the world. If they have a longer lifespan, they are more likely to help their country develop rapidly because of their experience and talents. Thus, young people will have more opportunities to learn many useful things and get precious advice from old citizens. 

Finally, it is the marvelous development in modern medicine that can have a huge impact on children’s lives through childbirth. Today, most babies are born in hospitals which provide them with modern medicine and qualified doctors to help them live better. 

In conclusion, with the benefits of modern medicine, I think that people can enjoy a healthy life and have a longer life expectancy. In the future, we hope to see a significant increase in people's life-span thanks to the advance of technology in the medical field. 

Sample 2:

There has been dramatic advancement in the field of medicine over the last few years. This has increased the use of medicine in people’s lives. Some people argue that modern medicine helps them to stay healthy and active in the long run. Others claim that newly developed medicines have great side effects, and it could cause various diseases. I believe that one can be healthier and wealthier by adapting natural ways to deal with their health problems.

Nowadays, large numbers of people are addicted to different medicines and these medicines have become a mandatory part of their daily routine. This helps them to fulfill their task without any inconvenience, for instance, patients with asthma use inhaler in order to avoid breath issues. People, who are affected with diabetes, take insulin injection and drugs to maintain their sugar level.

However, natural activities such as exercise, walking and pure food are a few factors that play a pivotal role in improving people’s lives. People associated with sports activities look younger and smarter than their peer group of the same age. In addition to this, being deprived of such activities will make them lethargic and make them more susceptible to illness. That is why doctors and nutrients always emphasize physical tasks and proper food respectively.

To sum up, I would like to say that modern medicine has significant effects on people’s health, it could be a great way of curing illness but won’t be a compulsory reason for a longer life. On the other hand, happiness, smooth family, healthy food and extras curricular activities are a few factors that have great influence on people’s longer lives.